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bidoonline
28-02-2008, 02:42 AM
This is a short verse of mine . say ur opinions about it frankly. I have many poems but I'm longing for ur encouragement to publish them here.


Where Are You Go ,Come Here!


No, Going Away Make Me Fear


Your Love In My Heart, I Can't Bear


My Longing In My Eyes Too Appear


My Tender Heart Pulses, Can't You Hear?


Without You I'm Lost, Keep Me Near


Your Eyes So Beautiful, Mine Tear


To Me, You Are The Dearest Of The Dear

lover4ever, bidoonline

i . k . i
28-02-2008, 04:31 PM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
gOod
bUt yOu sHould do yOur besT to maKe it better thaN
bUt
i thInk that is atranslation of soNg
:)
my opinion
go ahead
i hope to see you here again